UI/UX designer | Any advice from experienced people?

Question

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Good day to all, I would like to ask more experienced people for advice and a request to tell, share their experience, as well as point me on the right path, so to speak.
I started doing web design not so long ago, I watch lessons, courses, I really like the work of a UI / UX designer.
By the way, if anyone has not looked at the profile, my name is Denis, I am 22 years old and I am from Moscow.
Web design began to attract me a few months ago when I accidentally got acquainted with the understanding of what UI / UX is and what people generally do in such a profession. I began to closely study the work of people, to understand what they do here in general, as they say, and what is required for this. All that I have from experience in working with programs is Sony Vegas Pro, I started using and studying it since 2015 and mastered it quite well, to this day I sometimes sit in it and edit something. I make various videos for myself, there were a couple of orders, but not about that.
I somehow didn’t touch Photoshop and other programs and they didn’t interest me.
After I understood what these people were doing, I began to look, of course, for all sorts of lessons, courses, books on the subject and found a lot of sensible ones and came across a large amount of information, which I gradually learned and remembered after this time. I started to study closely in different courses and lessons 2 weeks ago and during these two weeks I figured out perfectly in different programs, made several designs for sites (at my own discretion) for several lessons and, as of course, I didn’t like everything and looked miserable .. .Now, after 2 weeks of training and studying all this, I finally more or less did the work that I liked and decided to share with you and hear your criticism. In what direction should I move, what should I change in my work, what would I remove altogether.
What is your general opinion on the work of a person who does this for the first time in self-study after 2 weeks? Is it a good job for such a time or is it bad and worth paying attention and studying more diligently.
I apologize for such a long and long text ... I hope you read it and will not throw "slippers" in my direction.
Thanks to everyone who paid me so much attention and yes, below I will attach a screenshot of my work.
The design for the hookah bar is fictional.

Answer 1

In general, I have never been a designer, but:
1. In the upper right corner, the yellow lines do not touch normally in the corner
2. "A new generation of hookahs that changed everything" - there is no space before the comma
3. The blue color of the line under this phrase is knocked out of general color style
4. "RESERVE A PLACE" - not only does it just look outrageous, but also to write like this in caps, as far as I know, bad manners (some designer often talked about this, but I don’t remember his name)
5. The disgusting font is especially noticeable on a phrase written in caps
6. The image of the hookah goes beyond the line below it
7. It seems that the hookah is tilted slightly to the left, especially at the bottom. Maybe it's because of the line at the bottom, not sure
8. I would make icons in the same style (either all round or all square) and all the same size
9. On the second page, the title needs to be given space at the top, it is strongly pressed to the top border
10. Again, why was space given on the third page heading, but not on the second? I understand that there is a lot of text, but this content should be adjusted to the design and structure, and not vice versa 11. On the third page, it is desirable to make sure that the " ORDER
" buttons are on the same level
wrote above

Answer 2

a lot of bukaf :)
asked a specific question = received a specific answer,
and they will babysit you only for the loot (because this is the time.
not?
I dislike / comment = I will see the opinion (not the one who asked, but those who could, BUT .. .).
to know and teach someone yourself = this is a huge difference = talent is needed

Answer 3

Here, here it is a consequence of courses and articles from dropouts. This is not a relevant job, and you are not a relevant specialist. When will it dawn on you that web design is not about software?
And those who are trying to drive constructive criticism - do not. Do this with promising works that have small flaws. This design is not the case

Answer 4

Designing interfaces (ux/ui, if you like) for 8 years. Now I am working on state products of medicine. Ready to discuss your work, give direction to growth.
2000/hour
From a short note, I recommend that you begin to explain to yourself the purpose of each element in the design, each line, each color. Ask if you can do without it.

Answer 5

Denis
Velkom to telegram: alexmase.
Write, let's talk. You can ask questions, I will tell you what is worth studying and what to see, how best to do it, I will give links to useful materials and services, etc.
Basically just hang out :)

Answer 6

Everything written above (I haven't read everything) can be summed up in a few words - the basics of composition, color and typography in web design. It is not necessary to search, read and watch something exactly on this topic, but this is what you are missing and what you need to learn first of all