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Computers

Hello. In short: I don’t understand computers (hardware), I have never assembled computers, and in fact this is my first PC that I plan to assemble on my own. All my experience is based on watching some thematic channels on YouTube and in dialogues with friends who understand this topic.
https://www.dns-shop.ru/conf/ba528cee842569e1/
The assembly goes to 53k, which is generally affordable, but if there is an opportunity to save on something, it will be a plus. Thank you.

ps and I ask you not to inflate the holistic topics about "this is shit, but this is better", as many experts in this matter like. I still don't get it, so just write what you think is better and why