Please rate the work.

Question

Design

Please rate the work. I'm a beginner. I want to hear what's wrong! Please don't drink too hard!

Answer 1

It looks like trolling, but if anyone is interested: we remove all the garbage and show more "meat". The meat in this case is a hot dog. We reduce the number of objects and get a stable layout. Distinguishable even in microformat:

Answer 2

What does "don't drink too hard" mean? Do you want criticism or a pat on the head?
Done sucks. Go ahead and keep practicing.
Even to me, far from design, it is disgusting to look at this shit.
Hack.
I did not understand what I was offered to buy. Car, lemonade or rolling pin

Answer 3

For a shawarma banner at the station, I think it will do) 4.50 is it in shekels?