How to write a cover letter on upwork?

Question

Upwork

Hello.
I've been trying on upwork for more than a month, no result, 2 people answered, then merged. I read cover letter guides, I try to write personally for the client, if possible, but the output is zero. I am among the first to write, I have a portfolio, one completed order for 5 stars. Here is an example of my cover letter
Hello, dear Abir!
I hope this mail finds you well. I have read your post with interest, cause I am experienced illustrator and I love to draw people. I can create different portaits, from realistic to cartoonish, so I would be glad to draw sketch you need. I can draw in different styles, so if you provide me references, I will embody your idea in the way you see it. And of course, I will meet your timeline. Samples of my previous work are attached to the letter.
I'm glad to answer any questions you may have!
Thank you for your time
Profile - design, illustration.

Answer 1

Less "Yakat" and immediately write essentially without a paragraph. The client sees only the first 2 lines when viewing the list of covers (see screenshot). Well, immediately copy-paste is visible on the screen, you write just like an Indian)

Answer 2

the phrase inserted in the appropriate place helps well

Je n'ai pas mange depuis six jours

Answer 3

Got Rising Talent?
Loop application always first?

Answer 4

I agree with others, less water and immediately on the case you need to ask questions about this task - so the client sees that you really read his task and are interested.
Example: I have read, I need additional information from you to solve, what do you think ... ? Are there any references, similar solutions that you like? Any another question...
And another important tip that helped me at the beginning: I immediately did some piece of work in a cover letter, threw in a draft design either of the desired solution, and immediately showed "here is one of the options I can offer you like this drawing/solution/whatever". In this way, I received far more than one order, people were surprised that I had already done something, and not just promised to do it, and they often liked what I did.