Can you rate my resume on a freelance exchange?

Question

Freelance

I am a beginner coder and so I decided to file my first resume. So far, I only have two training sites and I need to get an order with a real task. Please evaluate the resume and share your opinion, what can you add?
https://freelancehunt.com/freelancer/tempest_rock.html

Answer 1

Since I am a novice developer, I will do the work for free (or almost) for a review. Knowledge of the basics of Html, CSS, the ability to write simple scripts in Jquery and JavaScript. Experience with Wordpress CMS. When developing, I use Bootstrap and LESS. Ability to work with Photoshop.

A double space is an error, a space is put after a comma, a space is also put after a dot, HTML is written in capital letters, "writing skill" is a speech error.
In terms of content, there is no way to scare off a client more than saying "I'm a beginner developer", "simple scripts". Would you go to a hairdresser with that description? And the car would be entrusted to a locksmith with such a description?

If suddenly the customer knows something

LESS - мёртвая технология, Bootstrap тоже удел "таких себе верстальщиков".

Two is shorter.

Answer 2

Jquery is written by others.
Terrible summary. If you were in the customer's place, why would you choose this resume from a thousand? No reason...
You need to remove that newcomer, I would remove it altogether about free, but you can write something like "ready to work on an interesting project for a purely nominal fee." Maxim Morev painted it well, it’s just that your literacy is so-so composed.
The most important thing now is to supplement the resume with examples. In general, you have chosen your own path. Nothing special shines on freelancing, especially for you, especially layout. Find a better job.