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Bongie2018-10-05 21:59:59
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Bongie, 2018-10-05 21:59:59

Need a design review for a TF (wp) theme?

Hey! We need your assessment of the design of two pages: "About us" and "Investors". Your criticism and suggestions for improvement are needed: adding interactions/animations (which ones), colors, positioning/removing/adding blocks (which ones). In general, give criticism to the maximum.
The priority for today is the Investors page (second). I would be very grateful for your help!
https://www.figma.com/file/LwSXrGEfpTDB7m511q3tBso...

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dicem, 2018-10-06
@dicem

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Красная - думаю нужно все таки выровнять их на один уровень;
Синяя - Шрифт уплотнен слишком, думаю line-height нужно побольше, возможно кегль прям чуток понизить, цвет на мой вкус чуток побледнее сделать.
Думал сначала, что слишком бледный шрифт для белого фона, а сейчас же присмотрелся и вроде ничего.
Думаю от этих линий лучше избавиться
Первый символ выше, на уровень с основным текстом
Опять же очень плотный шрифт, я б наверно даже подумал над тем, чтоб сменить его.
As for fonts, you can probably choose something more elegant, look here for examples: TYT
There are very good examples of using both serif and sans-serif font pairs.

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lagudal, 2018-10-06
@lagudal

Basically good in my opinion. To trim, minor flaws have already been pointed out, I will add something.
On the first page in the header, the paragraphs obviously have something to do with line-height, it looks too dense.
Where it was advised to get rid of the lines, first try to make them thinner, it might look good.
In my opinion, the fonts correspond to the main norms, but with a large title (THE) I would still play around. It seems to fall out a little, look for other options.
As for the animations, it's hard to give advice here, the only thing is that it's very light, no sudden movements. It is possible to designate the appearance of content on a scroll, top-bottom or from the sides - only experimentally. The main thing is not to overdo it.

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