How to finalize the logo?

Question

Design

Please give me advice on how to finalize the logo .

Especially for the black and white version.

Thank you!

Answer 1

https://www.artlebedev.ru/kovodstvo/business-lynch...

Answer 2

First and foremost, good design is almost always serious styling.
This logo lacks this a lot, details in the form of folds and others should be drawn with a clearer and "cleaner" line, while the character of the dog should not be lost (working with dribble as an example) This comes with experience and practice.
Secondly, in the bw version, fill the lower right and upper left corners with gray, which will be lighter than the other corners, there will be no stroke by itself. in the font block "show" will be the same color as the corners. (bw with color gradations)
Third, illusions and other things are great, but now it's a dog with two heads - it is necessary to make a separation of objects along the central axis, it is possible to play with a frame, etc.
Fourth, compositionally, the faces of dogs stuck to the edges of the logo - there is no buzzing, air is needed.
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Answer 3

What's with the diaphoretic color in the top logo?
The .me domain zone is completely superfluous in the logo, it immediately starts to read somehow strangely.