Evaluate your portfolio, what's wrong?

Question

Portfolio

Hello. Created a portfolio site. Please give feedback on it :)
Namely:
What is wrong, why
What to add, etc.
Looking for a job at the moment junior-frontend.
Thank you.
website - Eduard-work.ru

Answer 1

1. Pay attention to the "boldness" of the font. It is original for you, it is not worth changing, but it is lost on a light background, it is also lost when the headings are in Cyrillic. Latin always looks more aggressive. Can be corrected by adding fat or changing the color to a contrasting one.
2. The concept of your portfolio is original, and yet needs to be improved. Pay attention to the first screen - it immediately seems that you are a singer or an artist and you will have to order tickets =). If you reduce the black screen by half or by 2/3 and add your work in thumbnails with the subheading "My projects" with transitions down, it will be more original and clearer than what you are doing.
3. Make the call for cooperation with you more aggressive and persistent. Maybe even immediately on the first screen. Your photo is slightly smaller, and the phrase "I will fulfill all your three wishes. I am engaged in website building and implement original projects." Otherwise, it seems that you are asking to cooperate with you, and do not offer people solutions to their problems.

Answer 2

1. On a white background, the inscription "menu" is lost joxi.ru/vAW4lOXf1Razbr
2. Probably there should be a cross here joxi.ru/eAOleWLhxGQV4r
3. For soap and phone, you can make a dialer/
mailer open when you click on them hover arrow climbs out of the container joxi.ru/D2P4edKfpWlb12
And in general, it's not bad at all.

Answer 3

I would remove the photo from the top - the client is interested in your work, and not who you look like.
About myself - for example, as a client, I would not care what you read and what you devote time to, seeing it is clear that you are still learning something, and the client needs a ready-made specialist, and you yourself make it clear by this description that what - you are studying there, new technologies are cool, but you, not others, should know that you are learning them))