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Anna Bakurova2015-05-28 21:20:50
Design
Anna Bakurova, 2015-05-28 21:20:50

Write the main mistakes of this design?

Link to design
Write in this order
1) blunders
2) minor
3) niggles
It is desirable that the arguments be with links to useful articles.
Thank you all in advance.

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Denis Ineshin, 2015-05-28
@Libris

You don't need to use this font everywhere. It's great for headlines, but not for small text.
The rest is decent, only here is a minor problem with copyright: habrahabr.ru/post/23812

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Eugene, 2015-05-28
@blasheevich

You started with curved lines and ended for some reason with a triangle and straight lines, there is no sense of unity, because of this, a lot of just superfluous, a slight feeling that this is just another site. The white areas are in contrast, more than they need to be.
Aren't you afraid that your client will start turning the wheel back and forth, and if this sharp drop in white and black coincides with alpha waves in his brain, he will have an epileptic fit? Then curbs, what did you want to say with all this variety of your curbs? Although the idea is clear, did you intend to play with these two colors, but not to the same extent, not to the same pixel stripes? Here the corners are rounded, here they are not rounded, there are not corners at all. You start with squares, then move on to semi-curves, then go back to right angles, then offer rounds, and end up with a triangle! At the end, I see not the same site that was at the beginning! Where is the stylistic unity! Where do I ask?

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MoeSzyslak, 2015-06-08
@MoeSzyslak

It is not always clear how buttons react to hover / click / and active state. The Write button in the header is lost due to contact with another pink design element. We have already said about the font - it works for headings, but does not work for body text. They have already said about the corners too - somewhere sharp corners, somewhere rounded. There is no unity.
Due to what happens the horizontal scroll in the ART section is not clear. What and how happens in the Best Works section is also unclear. You have to strain your eyes to read the text in the block with the phone (it is a long ...) because of the bright background.

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