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Mikhail Kolpakov2016-04-27 00:43:32
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Mikhail Kolpakov, 2016-04-27 00:43:32

What are the mistakes in this landing?

Hello everyone, I would like to know your opinion, what mistakes did I make in this landing page and what needs to be corrected? This is my first landing, made for a beauty salon in the city of Pskov, but there are almost no clients from it (although almost no one has them anyway, because the situation with salons in the city is quite complicated) I would like to know exactly from the landing itself, contextual advertising try to fix it yourself.
salon-beauty-pskov.ru

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- Red on blue - terrible (it's about the hover in the menu)
- It's not clear where the button is, where the input field is, where the text is. Make the controls in one style, otherwise I tried to click on the blue box for a long time (LEVE AN APPLICATION ....)
- I haven’t had time to log in yet, but they are already forcing me to accept some agreements, and even my personal data is being collected process. oh, I'll close the page .... (remove this inscription in the basement)
- Half of the text is not readable at all against the background of the pictures. Just break your eyes.
- In the salons "Alina", In the salons "Alina", In the salons "Alina", In the salons "Alina", In the salons "Alina", In the salons "Alina", In the salons "Alina" (well, I think you understand, yes ?)
- I barely noticed the price. Is there a normal price?
- Red on blue - fu (this is about a 100px frame around the photos, as if looking through a porthole).
Something like this...

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