What are the mistakes in my design?

Nikolai Antonov2015-08-30 13:40:14

User interface

Nikolai Antonov, 2015-08-30 13:40:14

I made the first work for themeforest, uploaded it and sent a reject to finalize the design. What's wrong? What are the errors? What do not you like?
Site - link
On the first page only demos. Click and see the pages. Some are repetitive.

Answer the question

In order to leave comments, you need to log in

9 answer(s)

Neron, 2015-08-30
@my-nickname

Everything is fine and cool, but the text is very faded and low-contrast. I give a tooth that the problem is in this. From now on, test the product on shitty monitors

William Thorn, 2015-08-30
@xydope

I think the main one is that the design is missing :)
Perhaps this link is correct?

Curly Brace, 2015-08-30
@stasuss

mine these laptops look too contrasting. they should be made less eye-catching. and the color of the back is also quite bright

Sergey Malovichko, 2015-08-30
@mrSerg161

on a tablet, the content runs over the navigation bar.
on the main page there is something with a background image (a horizontal line skips without a picture)
But in general it’s very “bumpy”

Yuri Kudrenko, 2015-09-01
@marina_k

A little offtopic, but still. Design must solve the problem. Even if no one sets a task for a designer, a good designer understands that design is not just beautiful pictures. Even if you are doing something very universal, not for a specific client, there are always tasks that the design must solve (at least for the texts to be read). If you need a visitor to read the text, and next to the text there is a beautiful picture that draws attention to itself - a good designer will remove the picture or make it less catchy.
The simplest example is a selling one-pager. His job is to make it readable. The design should focus on the benefits of the service or product and in order to end up buying.
But most designers and developers see only beautiful pictures and animation in the landing page. And they rivet them based on this vision. In the right landing pages, animation and pictures solve the problem. They don't just work for beauty. Here it is said about this webdela.ru/blog/design/razrabotka-tekhnicheskogo-zadanie-na-dizayn-internet-magazina/#designers

Oleg Pristupa, 2015-08-30
@Danaket

Your link is broken, fix it - we'll see!

Night, 2015-08-30
@maxtm

Do you sell macbooks?

Sanes, 2015-08-31
@Sanes

Kinda sad...

Tatyana, 2015-09-01
@cmo

When you click on the central monitor of Rock Band, this is what Kaspersky gives out:
I don’t even want to look further