I am writing the first test case, what to add and what to remove?

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Software testing

Hello.
I am writing my very first test case for the first functionality that came across, can you give a couple (or maybe several pairs) of recommendations?
Email, of course, has been changed.

Performance of the "Forgot your password?" on Toster.ru
TK ID/Priority #0001 P2
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When created: Created by: Modified:
06/24/19 V. Pupkin New test case
Idea: Testing the performance of the password recovery functionality "Forgot your password?" on the Toster.ru portal, Checking an incoming letter from the site to an e-mail with a link to restore, as well as checking the content of the letter itself.
Preconditions: To recover your password, you must have a valid account.
"Additional information: Account used during testing on Toster -
Email: [email protected] Email
account (mail.ru) -
Email - [email protected]
Password — such-such"
Expected result: The instruction successfully gets to the correct email. box within 1 minute. In the content of the instructions there is a link to password recovery, after clicking on the link and filling in all the fields, the account is assigned a new password.
"Steps:
1. Go to the site https://toster.ru/
2. Enter the site
3. Click on the button "Forgot your password?"
4. Fill in the fields and send
5. Go to the mail.ru website using your login and password (see above)
6. Find the letter sent from habr account mailer
7. Follow the link in the letter
8. Fill in the fields for a new password
9. Make sure that password has changed by logging into the site with a new password"

PS I have it in the form of a table, so we went a little

Answer 1

Well, different organizations have their own attitude to TK. They can be detailed, they can be brief. In my opinion, they should be detailed so that beginners quickly enter the course of work, or so that the automator automates the shopping mall, or it is important that a new user can figure it out.
This TC does not contain the expected result and does not contain detailed
"Steps (Sh) and Expected result (OR):
S1. Go to the site https://toster.ru/ OP1 successfully opened the main page of the site or the authorization window
S2. Enter the site OP2 appeared authorization window and button "Forgot password
Ш3. Click on the button "Forgot your password?" OP3 E-mail filling form is open
Here you can add a negative check: enter a non-existent and incorrect E-mail
Sh4.
Fill in the field and press the send button
. Find a letter sent from habr account mailer OP5 the letter was found and arrived in time up to 59 seconds
7. Follow the link in the letter OP7, the transition is successfully visible ...
8. Fill in the fields for a new password and click.... OP8 Message about ...
9. Enter the site under the new password OP9 the password is really changed and the authorization URA ... successfully ...
Something like that ... Sorry, I'm lazy and I'm at work time(