How can the design of this business card be improved?

Question

Design

I am a beginner designer in the web/ui/ux field, today I made my first business card. I am ready to listen to absolutely any criticism from the pros, any advice, wishes, suggestions. I would be very happy if the design pros gave a couple of tips. Thanks a lot for your indifference!

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Answer 1

• do not mix languages: Russian and English.
  
• small white text will be unreadable on a business card 9x5cm
  
• white text on a dark background will have to be printed in offset with the fifth white ink, this is expensive.
  
• "canyon" is spelled with an A.
  
• the phone number is better read without extra hyphens.
  
• the logo is less important than the phone, etc. information - more space for information, less for the logo
  
• the name "Dag trip" is close to "Bad trip".
  

Answer 2

I don't know if you showed us a business card with or without clearances. If not, then it is better to leave a larger distance for the cropping error. In other words, I would not place a phone number at the very, very edge.

Answer 3

I will speak fact.
From the design here, probably, only the logo, the rest is a picture and text.
The business card is small, the picture will be out of place, as well as two different fonts. Transparency, unevenness.
In general, you need to learn the basics.

Answer 4

It would be nice to use a modular grid, i.e. place elements according to vertical and horizontal guides - everything is chaotic right there

Answer 5

there is absolutely no harmony, the font looks antediluvian, faded, lost. everything is too close to the edges.

Answer 6

In addition to everything that has already been said to you, your list markers have moved down a lot. The top marker is well above the text, but the bottom one is correct:
This breaks the composition a lot .