Look, please, how do you like the header of the site?

Question

Design

I want to make a site for a friend
For me, this is the first site, the first layout.
I will be glad to hear criticism and wishes!

Answer 1

1. let's navigate in the right order: first glitter, delivery and payment with an offer, factoids about yourself, and finally, contact information.
2. let's show that the links are links, make the line with transparency so that it doesn't interfere, let's write everything in lowercase, in European style.
3. align the logo, navigation and phone on 1 line - the upper border of lowercase
4. write the mobile phone correctly, without garbage
5. simplify the logo
6. use 1 typeface
7. make a less aggressive pink
8. make a quote, make hanging punctuation, add the author
9. show crafts
well, this is fastran, maybe better;)

Answer 2

I liked the fish) It seems to me that in the slogan (... how delightful to create.) the word "what" is easier to enter instead of "how". I did not immediately notice the links with an arc, is it intended so?