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Artyom2020-02-09 14:20:34
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Artyom, 2020-02-09 14:20:34

How to write an advertising text for a fitness trainer to get approved?

I made an advertisement for a fitness trainer in Facebook Ads for Instagram. But Facebook does not approve of it because of "Personal characteristics". I have already redone the text 20 times, changed the picture, etc. But Facebook still disapproves for the same reason. What? I do not understand??

Original advertisement:

Do you want to be healthy and get the body of your dreams? It's possible!
️‍♀️ Hello, my name is Alena. I am a fitness trainer and rehabilitator.
I invite you to a FREE personal training and fitness plan development. As well as online training and diet planning.
✉️ Don't put it off until Monday. Subscribe and write to me in direct for more information.


Latest announcement:
Personal fitness training for the whole body!

️‍♀️ My name is Alena - I am a fitness trainer and rehabilitation specialist.

I conduct a FREE personal training and fitness plan development. As well as online training and diet planning.

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Ronald McDonald, 2020-02-09
@Zoominger

For some reason, in my head, this text was read in the voice of these women from TV stores, only the moronic perky music is missing.
They would redo everything, besides, the text is too big for Instagram, phytonies niasilat.

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Dimonchik, 2020-02-09
@dimonchik2013

announce shit
Alena remove the
experience add

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Sergey Komlev, 2020-02-13
@SerjAir

1. You can not use personal characteristics in ads: name, race, religion, beliefs, age, sexual orientation, gender identity, disability, medical and financial condition.
2. And better convince this ️‍♀️ symbol and replace it with another one.

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Ruslan Bugaenko, 2020-05-07
@rusektrener

I wrote on my website https://fitnes-trener.com/category/kak-raskrutitsy... about the promotion of a fitness trainer. From experience I will say that you need a benefit in your message.

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