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Sergey Kondrashevsky2020-01-24 23:59:14
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Sergey Kondrashevsky, 2020-01-24 23:59:14

Can you rate the Intro design?

Good evening!
I've just started learning web design. Made such a Header.
I ask the Designers to evaluate how the picture is in general.
Please write what problems are here, maybe you will advise something.

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Thank you!

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archelon, 2020-01-25
@archelon

the hat is unreasonably large, and the logo is small.
halve the height of the header, double the logo.
blue color, IMHO, superfluous. let it be red like a car.
the rounding of the 'build' button is fu((
blurring the background under the block with the info-coder will not cope.
In text blocks, sizes and indents are very bad.
If tomorrow it will still be relevant, and I will not be lazy, I will write more.
But there is potential.

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Athanor, 2020-01-26
@Athanor

The main problem is that now it is not a design, but a picture.
It can be seen that you came up with a “fake” project for yourself, which you want to put in a briefcase later - ok, fine, but the error occurred at the very beginning. Any design solves a problem, but here it is not even set. Is this page for selling a car? In a row, someone will buy a Porsche over the Internet. Or maybe she is to present the car in order to attract a person to come to the salon and touch it, then where is the information about the dealers? Farther. Such purchases are made not rationally, but emotionally, look at how these machines are presented on the off site - the main attention is paid to the appearance and experience of using the product, all sorts of little things and amenities, the specification and performance characteristics are not even presented in the middle of the page, but closer to the end, why then are they on your home screen? I think the idea is clear.
Until you decide what the page should “do”, it doesn’t matter what size the logo is, what rounds the buttons have, and what size the text is typed, because all these buttons and content have no function and there are no criteria for evaluating them. Yes, typography and everything else plays an important role, but not in the first place.

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